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He sprinkled glitter between the sheets of her bed and said;

“Now you can sleep among the stars.”

She woke cold, exhaling icy comet trails, and wishing she’d reminded him how empty space was; (wishing she’d remembered to tell him all she wanted was to sleep among his arms.)


. i'm sorry .


She collected atoms and draped them over his shoulders in pearlescent strands until the shadows of his skin sweated starlight. Her eyelashes brushed against the flesh of his wrist as she shut out the sight of his empty eyes, her lips/mouth/heart kissing the white marble wave hiding the pulse in his arm. (a blistered thumb spanned the ravine, a pile of melted razors at her feet)

She whispered to his veins,

“Dear heroes of mine,
please,
be strong a little longer
and tell this to his heart

tell him,
tell him for me
that i brought him universes
infinity in the infinitesimal

tell him
i brought him
everything he has ever been to me.

tell him
it isn't better this way

tell him
I said
Please.Don't.Leave.


i love you
©2009 ~TheAfterWhys
:icontheafterwhys:

Author's Comments

Penumbra - a partial shadow, as in an eclipse, between regions of complete shadow and complete illumination.

And she prayed that her little red cape messengers, would make it to his heart before gravity got the better of it.

Distance (any kind of distance) leaves us with miles of empty air space, and no word long enough or fast enough to fill it. For all so far away - I miss you, will miss you, do miss you, always. :heart:


[Sparky, this is for/inspired by you via 'holograph theory']

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:icond00dbiteme:
I loved the first idea with the stars.
Truly beautiful ^____^
:iconinsanitykeepsmesane:
I agree with the above comment that first line was truelly genius :heart:
:icontheafterwhys:
hhaa, so did I. The rest of it awaits the scalpel however, *galres at it*

Thank you.^^

--
Whats up?
But wishing stars,
and little men from mars.
:icontheafterwhys:
mhmm, still have to mess with the rest of it though....

--
Whats up?
But wishing stars,
and little men from mars.
:iconsouprrman:
look at you, being fantastic and all that.
haha, I love this.<3

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i really wish i had a fish.
:icontheafterwhys:
hahah you should have seen the original that the first two commenters had to put up with. :D That one was pretty bad, and this one still needs work, but thank you, very much. ^^

--
Whats up?
But wishing stars,
and little men from mars.
:iconmaimtorturekill:
i didn't even feel your hand in my brain.

--
.metal.
:icontheafterwhys:
hum.

is that a good thing?

--
Whats up?
But wishing stars,
and little men from mars.
:iconmaimtorturekill:
oh yes quite.


couldnt think of a more cognitive means of complimenting you...
but.

yeah.

exactly.
if i werent so metal, i might have cried. talk about your all time 'i know exactly what you mean.

this is my favorite of yours, ever.
if i could favorite it ten times, i would.

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.metal.
:iconalovelymeinside:
Oh wows. That's insanely beautiful. Reading anything you write, it feels so real to me. I just get sucked in, and have to snap myself back into reality when I'm finished. That's real talent there. Never ever ever stop writing.

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~There is life before death...but sometimes you're dead before you die.~

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